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iron_and_silver) wrote2003-04-16 03:06 pm
iron_and_silver) wrote2003-04-16 03:06 pm
yay
newly edited poem.
As fresh skin
There is always a chill/ when listening to anything by John Lennon/ because it always reminds me of the death/ of him/ my long farewell/ to innocence.
18 and inside Louisiana/ like a raw emerald/ in a forgotten mine/ J had a way of giving shelter/ to unstable tobacco/ the kind to threaten suicide/ from the fatness of his over ripe lips/ an unforgettable beauty/ when wearing dying jeans/ sweet saliva/ like the first time you tasted rain/ as a child.
I’ll never forget how blue the air was.
I wanted to feel the act of empty creation/ he wanted to feel the texture of my skin/ to prove my existence/ within our small hours/ he left minor fingerprints/ on segments of skin/ having a tendency to shed/ flakes of days descending/ like dead leaves/ soon to be reborn/ as fresh skin.
As fresh skin
There is always a chill/ when listening to anything by John Lennon/ because it always reminds me of the death/ of him/ my long farewell/ to innocence.
18 and inside Louisiana/ like a raw emerald/ in a forgotten mine/ J had a way of giving shelter/ to unstable tobacco/ the kind to threaten suicide/ from the fatness of his over ripe lips/ an unforgettable beauty/ when wearing dying jeans/ sweet saliva/ like the first time you tasted rain/ as a child.
I’ll never forget how blue the air was.
I wanted to feel the act of empty creation/ he wanted to feel the texture of my skin/ to prove my existence/ within our small hours/ he left minor fingerprints/ on segments of skin/ having a tendency to shed/ flakes of days descending/ like dead leaves/ soon to be reborn/ as fresh skin.